I am a year 10 student at Bay of Islands College in Kawakawa, New Zealand. This is a place where I share my learning.
Hello Alyssa,It looks like you have been enjoy your story you are writing over the past weeks. Maybe next time you could revise and edit your blurb. :)
Hi Alyssa, good work I love your story.maybe next time you could add in some pictures. keep up the good work
thank you for the comment i will do that next time thank you very much
Hello Alyssa,
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you have been enjoy your story you are writing over the past weeks. Maybe next time you could revise and edit your blurb. :)
Hi Alyssa, good work I love your story.maybe next time you could add in some pictures. keep up the good work
ReplyDeletethank you for the comment i will do that next time thank you very much
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