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Friday, March 2, 2018

kawa of care

This is my kawa of care and me and my friend done it. We done it together and it was so fun.We talk about what we were doing and we both done it. We work together just like team work.I  Hope you like it and bye.

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  1. Kia Ora Alyssa! My names Erika and I'm from St Patrick's school. I would just like to say this is an excellent piece of work and you and your friend had some really great points. One thing that you could do is go back and edit as you made some typos also maybe add some punctuation and grammar. Other then that fantastic job!

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    1. okay thank you for the feed back I will do that next time

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  2. Kia ora Alyssa, Im Meesha from Saint Patricks school in Greymouth. I really like your presentation you used to show people the Kawa of care and it was very helpful. Maybe next time you could revise and edit your work.

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    1. okay thank you for the feed back I will do that next time

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  4. i think that this would be a good thing to show children who are just
    starting off with there chromebooks and maybe next time insteand of
    saying help me to learn you could say something else that would make
    more sences

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